A few more changes
After showing my tutor my progression and the film, she suggested that I made a couple of alterations.
I took her advice and executed them accordingly.
One main thing we both agreed on changing was the font, I went with a font called Steiner which looks like this:
This font is clean cut and clearer than the font originally used which can be seen in the storyboard. It was inspired by the short film 365 days of make-up by Lernert & Sander, which is also shown in one of my previous posts. The change of font makes a significant change to the overall presentation and makes it look more professional.
My tutor Sharon also suggested that I take out one of the scenes (image below), I was a little sceptical of this at first but after removing it and watching it back I am pleased that I followed her guidance.
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